Gotta love the dramatic irony of it all.XD

That's where the inspiration came from Thanks for your comment!

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j'avou que la situation est bien drôle, j'aime ce style

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Haha, nice.

It's very...prosaic. Maybe you could try making it into a haiku? Lemme see how that would work...

I waited all night
And I sat staring at the phone
So sure you would call.

I glanced at the clock
Blearily through my teared-up eyes
Emotions full stirred.

I went to bed and
I then cried into my pillow
But then I awoke

A different view:
I found that I couldn't blame you
I've no service yet.

Maybe a bit strained. That was more just me being bored than any sort of commentary on your writing, Frosted, so I hope you don't mind me amusing myself with that. This poem is short and sweet and funny. I think maybe putting the 'couldn't' in bold is a bit much, though. Don't want to hit the reader over the head with the irony.

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Thanks!

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Ah, but the couldn't could be worse, in the handwritten version I had it in all capitals

Thanks as always for your comments, and I never mind you amusing yourself with my work - you're welcome to it

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I write in all caps all the time as well since I'm no good with regular print and horrible at cursive. Saves time.

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